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Friday, June 4

  1. page Progress edited ... 6/2/10 today i did my start up. fifty things i would never do, some of them were pretty funny…
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    6/2/10
    today i did my start up. fifty things i would never do, some of them were pretty funny. then i finished editing my forever yours paper. and i typed up the revisions. after that i just looked over my stories to make sure that they were good. hopefully next time i get to do my teacher conference.
    6/4/10
    today at first i didn't do much. I was waiting to get my teacher conference done. finally i got called for the teacher conference and mrs. gill told me what i needed to fix in my paper. After that, i got back to my computer and finished editing my forever yours paper with the corrections that mrs. gill gave me. next class i am going to finish up, by editing my Ciaran paper with things like run ons and comma splices. After that i will be done.

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    5:50 am

Wednesday, June 2

  1. page Progress edited ... 5/28/10 Today i did my start up in the beginning of class as usual. After that i re edited my…
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    5/28/10
    Today i did my start up in the beginning of class as usual. After that i re edited my Ciaran paper with the revisions i lost last class. After that i printed out two copies of my forever yours story, one for the teacher edit. The other was for me to do my self revision for. It is a good story and i like it alot, because i haven't found a lot of things that need fixing. next class i will probably get very close to finishing up my project.
    6/2/10
    today i did my start up. fifty things i would never do, some of them were pretty funny. then i finished editing my forever yours paper. and i typed up the revisions. after that i just looked over my stories to make sure that they were good. hopefully next time i get to do my teacher conference.

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    5:54 am
  2. msg 6/2/10 message posted 6/2/10 fifty things i would never do: 1. kill someone 2. kill myself 3. abuse an animal 4. drugs 5. d…
    6/2/10
    fifty things i would never do:
    1. kill someone
    2. kill myself
    3. abuse an animal
    4. drugs
    5. drink and drive
    6. jump into a vat of spiders
    7. swim in the ocean, bleeding profusely (SHARKS!)
    8. be a hooker
    9. lick an elephants poop (or any poop for that matter)
    10. get raped (hopefully)
    11. be a racist
    12. be a sexist
    13. sell drugs
    14. fight for something stupid
    15. become a stalker or be stalked
    16. go crazy (i shall never be crazy!!!)
    17. break a bone (hopefully)
    18. tell someone i love them and them not feel the same (that would be depressing.)
    19. fall out of love.
    20. drink urine.
    21. be an alcholic
    22. be a druggie (ew!)
    23. be a flounder (its a type of fish. they just seem kind of strange... hmmm)
    24. be a republican.
    25. be a president (first i dont think a women could be a good president. not being sexist just hello once a month we would be like BLOW EVERYTHING UP!!!!!!!! second, it would be to boring)
    26. live in a box.
    27. be homeless
    28. work as a secret agent. (i would suck at that. im to loud. I'd be like 'Da da daaaaaaa secret agent... ahem i mean me! reporting at the scene of the crime.' id blow my cover to quickly)
    29. regret any moment i have spent.
    30. buy something that is completely useless ( wait i think ive done that)
    31. not finish high school
    32. not go to college
    33. not graduate college.
    34. be a drop out
    35. go to russia and sell for big money (inside joke, go to russia as a prostitute and get sold for money)
    36.get divorced after i get married (If i marry someone i really do want to be with that person forever. not just be in it to leave in the end.)
    37. be with someone i dont want to be with (anyone but tyler. i wanna be with him only)
    38. burn down a house on purpose
    39. kill an endangered species (that wouldn't be very nice)
    40. kill any animal
    41. become suicidal.
    42. not get a class ring from high school
    43. be seriously depressed (never again!)
    44. become someone i'm not
    45. make pointless changes for people who don't matter (i'll gladly make changes for the better of myself)
    46. have any other color eyes. (i love my blue eyes that change colors)
    47. tell myself that i am anything but beautiful.
    48. lose my confidence that i have now
    49. do number fifty on this.
    49 and a half. (Ha i win!) Become hated by way to many people.
    5:05 am

Friday, May 28

  1. page Progress edited ... 5/24/10 Today i did my start up as usual. I printed out a copy of Ciaran, and started to edit…
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    5/24/10
    Today i did my start up as usual. I printed out a copy of Ciaran, and started to edit it. Then Kat asked me to edit her paper, so i did that. She is a really good writer. Then when i was done with that i finished editing my paper. It wasn't a very eventful day, but i'm just making more and more progress towards the final product.
    5/28/10
    Today i did my start up in the beginning of class as usual. After that i re edited my Ciaran paper with the revisions i lost last class. After that i printed out two copies of my forever yours story, one for the teacher edit. The other was for me to do my self revision for. It is a good story and i like it alot, because i haven't found a lot of things that need fixing. next class i will probably get very close to finishing up my project.

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    5:53 am
  2. msg 5/28/10 message posted 5/28/10 My greatest fear is simple really. It is losing people that I love. Throughout my life I have felt …
    5/28/10
    My greatest fear is simple really. It is losing people that I love. Throughout my life I have felt like people have either been taken away from me, or walked right out. It's always been a fear of mine. I don't like thinking about it because, without the people I love, I would be alone. I simply wouldn't know what to do. Those people are my everything, and honestly i need them. That is why losing the people that i love and mean the most to me, is my greatest fear.
    4:38 am

Wednesday, May 26

  1. msg 5/26/10 message posted 5/26/10 if i had three wishes it would be very difficult to make good decisions on what to wish for. First …
    5/26/10
    if i had three wishes it would be very difficult to make good decisions on what to wish for. First i would wish to go back and fix the mistakes that have put me into the position i am in right now. second i would wish that i could stay with tyler for the rest of my life because he makes me happy. lastly i would wish that all the pain that i feel could just go away. It would make everything a lot simpler. It probably seems like im being self absorbed only wishing for myself, but in order to help others i first need to be happy with myself.
    4:38 am

Monday, May 24

  1. page Progress edited ... 5/20/10 Today i did my start up. Then i immediatly began writing my story. Today i finished i…
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    5/20/10
    Today i did my start up. Then i immediatly began writing my story. Today i finished it, it had eight pages, i was going to make it more, but the ending was perfect so i didnt. i have just the right amount of pages for the final assignment. next class i am going to trade papers with someone so i can do my final peer revision, then i will give it to mrs gill so i can get my teacher conference out of the way.
    5/24/10
    Today i did my start up as usual. I printed out a copy of Ciaran, and started to edit it. Then Kat asked me to edit her paper, so i did that. She is a really good writer. Then when i was done with that i finished editing my paper. It wasn't a very eventful day, but i'm just making more and more progress towards the final product.

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    5:53 am
  2. msg 5/24/10 message posted 5/24/10 One chore i dislike a lot! is cleaning out my cats litter boxes. Not only does it smell absolutely …
    5/24/10
    One chore i dislike a lot! is cleaning out my cats litter boxes. Not only does it smell absolutely repulsive, but they go to the bathroom, alot. It's like they want me to suffer while i clean it. I also really hate doing the dishes, because they sometimes smell. But thats only if you leave food rotting on them for a long time. I don't like all the srubbing that i have to do. It's obnoxious, this is why they invented dishwashers. So that people wouldn't have to deal with this grodyness.
    4:38 am
  3. msg 5/24/10 message posted 5/24/10 One chore i dislike a lot! is cleaning out my cats litter boxes. Not only does it smell absolutely …
    5/24/10
    One chore i dislike a lot! is cleaning out my cats litter boxes. Not only does it smell absolutely repulsive, but they go to the bathroom, alot. It's like they want me to suffer while i clean it. I also really hate doing the dishes, because they sometimes smell. But thats only if you leave food rotting on them for a long time. I don't like all the srubbing that i have to do. It's obnoxious, this is why they invented dishwashers. So that people wouldn't have to deal with this grodyness.
    4:38 am

Thursday, May 20

  1. page Progress edited ... 5/18/10 today i started with my start up. as usual... Then i printed out my story and gave it…
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    5/18/10
    today i started with my start up. as usual... Then i printed out my story and gave it to amelia so she could peer revise it while i peer revised hers. once i was done with her story, i began writing a bit more on mine. i wrote about another page and a half i have to start to close the story soon though i think. because im almost at twenty pages. i could go on longer though. Next class i am going to go through and edit my paper with the revision amelia gave me. Also i will probably try and get a teacher conference for the class after that. I think i am almost done with my project though. Well even though i will still have to edit and stuff.
    5/20/10
    Today i did my start up. Then i immediatly began writing my story. Today i finished it, it had eight pages, i was going to make it more, but the ending was perfect so i didnt. i have just the right amount of pages for the final assignment. next class i am going to trade papers with someone so i can do my final peer revision, then i will give it to mrs gill so i can get my teacher conference out of the way.

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    5:51 am

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